Consumer male god

The next few days were very painful for Xi Luting.

She considered Ham's suggestion carefully and became increasingly inclined to accept it.

The retouching fee of 20 yuan is not high, but it is obviously negotiable.

Even if the price is not raised, making 2,000 yuan for revising 100,000 words is still a good part-time job.

She knows very well that the first draft with the plot is the most labor-intensive, but it is not difficult to revise and polish it.

There is less work, no fatigue, no need to show off, and you can use other people’s money to hone your skills...

So worth it.

Xi Luting is not short of money. Her family owns two houses and a shop in a prefecture-level city. Her father is a civil servant and her mother is a teacher. They are considered a well-off family and have never been short of food for her.

However, she wanted to take root in the magical city, and her family really couldn't provide much help.

She can only rely on herself.

It's a pity that the expected path really doesn't work, and she lacks learning talent - every time she thinks about this, she will secretly be jealous of Han Lie.

I am also a third-level student, why is my learning ability so different from that of a dog?

My IQ is obviously not low...

God, daddy is so unreasonable.

In short, I’m afraid I can’t count on my professional abilities, and the road after graduation will definitely be difficult. Now that I have the opportunity to continue to try online writing, it is really a good thing.

If Ham's outline and the three golden chapters were particularly good, she would even be willing to take a gamble and get a share.

But since the chat that day, the ham rich man has not logged in again for three days.

She was getting more and more anxious as she waited.

On the night of the 3rd, when she logged into the account without any hope, she finally saw a bright and beating avatar.

Phew, finally waiting for you...

She hurriedly opened the chat bar and saw a row of grinning expressions at first sight.

Ham for cucumber: "The outline and the three golden chapters are all done!"

Ham for Cucumber: "I'll send you a copy for you to take a look at. By the way, the outline only contains the early content, so you just need to understand it."

Xi Luting replied with "hmm" and couldn't wait to receive the documents.

When I finally opened the document, the first thing that caught my eye was the title——

"You have to live well without me for the rest of your life"

It's a bit literary and doesn't quite hit the mark, but it pokes fun at Xi Luting.

Looking at the text again, in the first chapter, the heroine Xi Meng and Wang Yan met on the high-speed train.

The origin of the story is that Ximeng was approached by a middle-aged man. She has a weak and kind personality and does not know how to refuse, so she is pestered by the old man.

As a result, it affected Wang Yan's mood sitting next to him, and the cold-faced male god made a strong appearance.

Like a great detective, he used the middle-aged man's clothes, watch, and conversation to completely peel off this guy's background, strength, and family.

The language was sharp and mean, which angered the middle-aged man.

But before a more intense conflict was about to break out, Wang Yan calmly revealed his trump card:

"In my eyes, you are like a completely transparent and ridiculous paramecium.

What is your strength?

Tongsheng Group?

Your immediate superior cannot be at Gu Mingtong's level, but if I call Gu Mingtong, he probably won't mind giving me face and casually dismissing a middle-level person in the group who can't figure out what to do.

How about it, do you want to bet whether the number Gu Mingtong in my mobile phone is real? "

The little villain was frightened and begged for mercy, then covered his face and ran away.

In just a few words, he successfully pretended to be mellow and showed his strong analytical skills and field control ability.

And it leads to a bug-like technique-cold reading.

Xi Meng was conquered by Wang Yan's performance.

At the same time, Xi Luting was also conquered by Ham's writing skills.

"Oh my god! Who is my little fan? Isn't the level of pretentiousness and slap in the face too high?!"

Xi Luting enjoyed reading just the first chapter and was extremely looking forward to the next story.

Of course, it's not without its problems.

In Xi Luting's view, many of the descriptions and wording habits in this chapter are still a bit harsh.

Too hard means too male perspective.

For example, the description of Simone's resistance is entirely guessed from a man's perspective. In fact, Simone's psychological reaction should be weaker.

But these are minor issues.

The entire first chapter, from the character design to the concept, to the completion and satisfaction of pretending to slap in the face, is all top-notch.

Although female-oriented online articles do not pay special attention to pretending to be cool, but if you pretend to be particularly high-end and stylish, it will actually produce a huge sense of satisfaction. This is the same for both men and women.

Moreover, the dialogues written by Ham can be directly used as lines in idol dramas.

This kind of film and television drama-like texture is so rare.

Xi Luting couldn't wait to read all three chapters, and a thought crazily echoed in his mind -

Cooperate with him!

A lonely voice: "I don't want the retouching fee, I want a one-third share!"

When Han Lie received the news, he had already written Chapter 6 of his new book about making money and defrauding girls.

"In that case, my standards for you will be stricter. Are you ready?"

A lonely voice said: "Just let the horse come over!"

Han Lie smiled.

Very evil.

Ham for Cucumber: "Then, design a passionate scene between Xi Meng and Wang Yan in advance, write it out and let me take a look.

The reasons, scenes, details, and special images must be written clearly.

Give full play to your imagination, write from a female perspective, and write more beautifully and passionately.

By the way, there is no limit to the length. "

Xi Luting's face suddenly turned red and he felt all ten of his toes curl up.

Damn, so shameful...

Why would I write something like that specifically for a man? !

Okay, okay, for ideals and art!

Luckily this is online.

Fortunately, the other party is a stranger...

The psychological pressure was forcibly resolved, but she was still a little awkward.

A hint of loneliness: "Well... I have a small proposal..."

Ham for cucumber: "Huh?"

A twinge of loneliness: "Just...can you change the name of the heroine?"

Ham for cucumber: "Reason?"

A hint of loneliness: "Just...don't you think it's a bit too ordinary?"

Ham for cucumber: "Then, change it to Xi Mengting?"

w(Д)w!

The moment he saw the words "Xi Mengting", Xi Luting's whole body went numb.

Mom, why are you getting closer with each change? !

If I do this again, I really put myself into it!

A twinkling of loneliness: "No, no, no! I mean, can you change your last name?"

Han Lie almost burst out laughing.

Wiping the tears that were forced out of her eyes, she decisively rejected Xi Luting's unreasonable request.

Ham for cucumber: "You can't change your last name. Xi has deep meaning."

Xi Luting trembled all over, his heart beating wildly.

"What's the deep meaning?"

Ham for cucumbers: "Mat: a mat made of grass or reed. Don't you think it fits her destiny very well?"

Post a daddy!

Xi Luting muttered angrily, and just as he was about to try to persuade him again, another message came from the other side.

Ham for Cucumber: "The heroine's surname cannot be changed, but other than that, the naming rights of the male and female protagonists can be left to you. I am really not good at naming female channels, you can think about it."

Xi Luting's eyes suddenly lit up, and a strange excitement filled his heart.

What's the male protagonist's last name?

I want his surname to be Han!