Fixing The Broken Plot Story

Chapter 1 - The Start

Morning 10:00 a.m

In a wide spacious room decorated in a simple but elegant furnishing there's a girl lying in a Queen size bed whose eyes are close.

Long gray hair, smooth skin that reflecting the rays of sunshine coming from the open window.

Rin Rize keep using a pillow to block the lights, continuing her precious sleep is her priority at the moment. The reason is because she sleep so late last night just to finish the novel that she's reading.

This is a habbit that never change since Rin Rize learn how to read, anyway no ones going to reprimand her because she's living all by herself together with her precious Nana a pure white cat that sleeping in small basket in the table, she accidentally found Nana in the garden when she's taking a little walk, liking it's soft white fur she decide to keep it to lessen her boredom.

Except ones every week someones taking care of the cleaning in the mansion that Rin Rize living in.

Rin Rize is already use to this kind of environment, she's an orphan althought their also other children just like her who got abandon, the same thing for Rize cause she doesn't feel anything in that place..the only one who can she trust is only herself.

Until she got adopted at the age of five by her adoptive mother Rin Yue whose on her early forties at the time.

Just like Rize her adoptive mother also doesn't have even a single relative.

The good thing about being adopted by a rich person is having good food to eat, cloths to wear, and to graduate in a prestigious schoo.

Until her adoptive mother died 3 years ago because of leukemia.

Rin Rize yawning while getting up in the bed, she look up in the window to check the weather. Although she doesn't have the plan to go outside sh still enjoying the tranquility and calmness of the place.

Right! her little experiment is progressing fast, even though she's not in the mood today she still obliged to finish it.

Rize inherit a pharmaceutical company from her adoptive mother, because she's too lazy to handle it, Rize hired a qualified employee to be the acting CEO so she can focus on lazying around plus experimenting a new type of medicine, that even commoner's can afford.

Inside a white room full of different medical instrument, Rin Rize is in the middle of a difficult process of mixing the components of her new medicine that can help the cancer patient prolong there life and less painful.

Different kind of chemicals sprawl in the messy table, together with her glass of water.

Rize's focus is on her experiment, too focus she miss a little detail.

And a tragic stupidity play her to death.

Just remind her first never to mix-up the dringking water in a bunch of chemicals before you drink, second to look what are you dringking, and third is to give her time to curse to her heart content.!?

D*mn life!?

D*mn you glass of water!? Why did you play hide and seek on me!

Before Rize close her eyes, she keep cursing this stupid setting of her death...!?

Meanwhile in a silent place in a middle of a dimention, inside of a simple room, a small white ball is in the middle in it.

A small sound coming from it.

"Fu fu fu... now is my time to shine.." coming from it, if it have a face even a grin will make-up for it's weird behavior, it didn't badge even a little bit as if waiting for something or someone.

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