Fixing The Broken Plot Story

Winds blowing...

Flower's blooming, green grass dancing in the tune of nature, birds singing, a small lake where lotus flower floating in the water, this kind of place can be described as a perfect paradise, giving one's soul a gentle and refreshing feelings.

Opening her eyes, this exactly what Rize's first impression, a joyful feeling overtaking her senses, just looking at this picture perfect place that can cause anyone to forget everything.

But before she can surveyed the whole place a scruchiating pain overtake her mind, biting her cherry red lips. Memories resurfing piece by piece, place, people, events that she knew that doesn't belong to her.

A few minutes later the pain that makes her feel like dying stop abruptly. Smiling to herself, this person is a blessed one but as they say nothing is perfect in life.

The vessel that she occupying is the Feng Empire Holy Priestess, Rong Chunwei. Bearing the First daughter and legitimate eldest miss of one of the prestigious family in the Feng Empire the Rong Family, house of the Right Prime Minister which her grandfather Rong Tao as the head.

A priestess is a holy maiden that blessed by the Gods since birth, it's position in society is just below the Emperor.

Basking in the radiant of morning sunshine, Rize one's again stimulate the memories of Rong Chunwei.

Again this place that Rong Chunwei living is the Feng Empire, in the whole world there's only one continent but four nation, First is the Feng Empire which is resources is abundant especially the food resources that even the other Empire jealous off and together with their great Military, the Long Empire is a place that can coexist with beast that already have sentient and can assume human form, the Gui Empire which divined doctors resided in, and medical ingredients that can be all be found in their Medicine Stores, and last is the Hu Empire that a place of merchant, craftsmen and artisan can also be found here that can produce magical artifact.

The plot story revolves in the female protagonists name Jia Chuchu, from the Jia Family, the third young miss but a concubine daughter of the left prime minister.

Jia Chuchu standing in her family is low because her mother is just a entertainer turned concubine, so as the story progress Jia Chuchu outer appearance is a kind and benevolent young lady, but behind the mask is a venomous snake that control by jealousy to others

especially to the Holy Priestess that everyone reveared in.

Just thingking her position and the need to vow on others to live, she directed her anger to the Priestess that opposite of her.

She ones saw the Empire Priestess, performing a sacred dance to appease the God and to give blessing.

Just seeing that this woman got all the things that she wish for. She didn't think and join in conspiracy to overthrow the Royal Family.

Jia Chuchu helps the unknown people to poison the priestess to sleep and be a reason to pull the masses to rebel the the reigning monarch.

The plan is to let the priestess sleep until the rebellion is taking place.

But Jia Chuchu mind got clouded and furious to the others plan that's why she make her own plan to kill the priestess and replace her.

Jia Chuchu's plan is a success, she got to kill the defenceless Rong Chunwei and lucky for her no one found out.

But the after event is not in her plan, because disaster keep popping everywhere.

The only reason that civilian people could think is because the God's are angry.

They don't know that their Priestess is dead and an imposter is making her way to gain the things that doesn't belong to her.

Years past but the situation in the Feng Empire didn't change, Jia Chuchu standing as a priestess is also in dire situation, until she meet the Crown Prince of the neighboring country the Long Empire Crown Prince which is the ML of the story, being the female lead halo she easily seduce the Crown Prince and leave the Feng Empire to be together and live her life with all the glory and ric.h.e.s.t that she's been l.u.s.ting all through out her life.

A few more years the Feng Empire diminished and got wipe out in the history for unknown reason.

With a blank face Rize mind is in chaos, having an ending like that is really something too stupid, dying in your sleep is a big b*llsh*t for Rize.

"Pie?, are you there?" ask Rize.

"Yes Host I'm here! Pie didn't go anywhere, Pie is always with host!" excited voice of Pie ring on her mind.

"This story of yours is truly amazing, you know? Why don't we just kill all of them to save time and of course we should start with that FL" crackling her fingers that it seems like ready to battle at any time.

A ball of light suddenly take form in front of her eyes,"You can't do that host! If you kill the FL or ML on this world, its automatic that you failed this mission host!" agitation's in Pie voice makes Rize laugh.

"Just joking, if I do that then the game is over, there's no p.l.e.a.s.u.r.e in that,right??" chuckling to herself.

"Pwew... I though host will really do that"

"Well I say, that's too easy for them.. Iam here, so let's give them a taste that will make them feel suffocated hehe" evil grin dancing on Rize small white face.

Pie's bouncing with happiness froze instant, he feel like his host is Satan and ready to use her death scythe to cause chaos itself.

Turning her back to the beautiful view, her slow but graceful movement make Rize look like a fairy maiden,her hanfu that swaying in the air and giving a celestial feeling to it.

Advancing till she reached her own courtyard, a feeling of melancholy fierce her soul.

Facing the blue like sky,

her new life begin now.