I can summon outrageous partners

Another dungeon story is over, and the street antenna is very gratified.

Every time I finish writing a copy, I always have the illusion of finishing the book.

Still the same sentence, friends who raise books can be slaughtered!

Slaughter hard! Subscribe hard! Do not pity me!

As usual, let's talk about our thoughts.

[If you haven't seen this copy, but still plan to read it, don't continue reading, it's suspected of being a spoiler. 】

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The most important thing this time should be the summary and reflection of the writing problem.

Why did I think of writing a fantasy story like this? To be honest, it’s hard to be regarded as a fan. In addition to re-enacting the three-year contract in the early stage, I didn’t even bother to borrow the name from the original.

Xiao Yan: I'm in the role.

It's pure magic.

I first had this idea in May last year. At that time, the meme of Douyin happened to be quite popular. I thought it was very interesting, so I went to chat with the editor. Can I use this as a selling point and directly open a complete book.

Then, just as the third dungeon ended, everyone said they wanted to change the taste, and the idea revived.

Back in May last year, the editor quickly rejected the idea.

Because the workload of replacement is heavy, it is difficult to be logical and self-consistent, and it is difficult to maintain interest after the gimmick passes.

How incisive.

Fortunately, I did not open such a book.

Within a few days of starting the dungeon, I clearly felt these disadvantages, but I have already written it, so I can't stop it in the middle.

Logical and self-consistent, I tried my best.

In terms of setting, the basic elements of the world are different, the environment is different, the customs are different, and the language is different. These knowledge belonging to the earth are difficult to understand, because after you know it, there is no reality to compare it with.

A world that doesn't obey the conservation of energy is considered hard learning.

Furthermore, knowledge must come from academic ability, and the speed of learning is not fast. Coupled with cognitive barriers, their "mentally handicapped" behavior is normal (loud).

The workload of the replacement is heavy, which is actually good. After all, what I want to write is only a copy, hundreds of thousands of words, and there is no need to prepare a fairly three-dimensional and complete world that is enough to support an entire book.

However, interesting brain holes are consumed too quickly. It is difficult to always come up with interesting things when teaching and supplementing these things.

The disadvantages of common gimmicks are weak in succession.

It’s a fresh picture, it’s very interesting at the beginning, but it’s a bit weak in the mid-term. Normally, this can only be remedied by incorporating more interesting settings.

I can only say that I tried my best.

But the biggest problem with this copy is actually not here.

——With the whole book, there is a sense of separation.

Suddenly there is no one outrageous partner (the last Li Jing is not counted), only Lin Li is left.

At that time, I was thinking about not mechanically descending, but now that I think about it, I feel a little overwhelmed, and there is a problem with the handling.

Because without this group of outrageous partners, the writing style feels different from the previous article, and I can feel it myself.

I knew I brought Tom, the stinky cat, over here, damn it!

[In addition, from this dungeon, it can be seen that (post bar) such a dungeon of bad stalks and flavors will never be written, and the future will definitely focus on childhood memories.

The rotten meme has played too much in this copy, come on. 】

——The details are not in place and the degree of completeness is not high.

Because everyone said they wanted to change the taste, I changed a little suddenly. To be honest, the time was too short and the outline preparation was a mess.

Originally, I wanted to write a school villain, but at the end, it was sublimated, and Lin Li made a shining appearance, making everyone in the poor world happy.

It was written a little bit later.

The foreshadowing and details in front are not in place.

For example, there should be more foreshadowings that Tiandao is not dead. At the same time, the appearance of the decision meeting should not be so abrupt. Lin Li should have gone to Zhongzhou to look at the customs and customs of Zhongzhou, and found the existence of Tiandao's tokens and the existence of the meeting...

By the way, make a few like-minded friends.

Then bring your friends to have a blast at the ending (for example, they were brainwashed, they agreed with Hun Shidi's statement, but they were "awakened" in Lin Li's words, and then they would rather blow themselves up GG, but also open the way for Lin Li to kill the soul, etc. Tian Dao sighs for it, etc.), at least it will be a little bit more popular than bloggers.

However, the gimmicks were weak in follow-up, and I felt a little uncomfortable with the data, so I deleted and adjusted this part.

This makes many of the original foreshadowings I wrote earlier useless.

Let me put it weakly: "My Wife is the Way of Heaven" and "Resurrection, My Way of Heaven" are actually the original foreshadowing. Zhongzhou will also have these two books, which correspond to the original book of "One Divided into Eight" and "Xiao Family". ending……

But fortunately, the integrity of this copy is barely there.

And compared with the previous one, the ending should no longer be regarded as the Mechanic Fall.

The strength of the soul is that Lin Li can't touch porcelain. I set it to be Tiandao to solve him. This has not changed, and the awakening of Tiandao is the result of Lin Li's hard work. It doesn't mean that the partner will solve this problem as soon as he appears.

In this dungeon, Li Jing's role is to control and prevent them from voting.

in the river! Quite the river!

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It's almost zero o'clock, and it's about to be released, so I won't say much.

In short, I have a deep feeling of the existence of the problem, and I am also summing up my experience.

No one wants to get this book done more than I do.

Fortunately, this book is regarded as a dungeon flow, and it is easy to cause problems when changing copies, but it is easy to adjust if there is a problem, and it will not collapse to the end.

I implore everyone to subscribe here.

Please please please please.

Recently, I have been dropping the average order (which is also the main reason why I speed up this dungeon), and now there are only more than 8,400. Seeing that Wanding and I are getting farther and farther away! ! Hey, I really want a green logo.

Let me talk about a few more that you may be concerned about.

Q: How to write in the main world?

A: The problem with the main world is that this book has always existed, even as soon as the main world was written, the book was raised hahaha.

I haven't come up with a particularly good solution yet, but if I still haven't figured it out in the past few days, then after this dungeon, there may not be a few chapters in the main world, and then I'll just 'skip' it until I figure out a solution. .

The plot of the main world is postponed first.

Q: The next copy?

A: It must be a childhood memory, but don’t reveal too much (TNND, I haven’t thought about it myself, and I can’t reveal it if I want to).

Q: Do you want to take a leave of absence to improve the outline of the dungeon main world?

A: This book friend named Pujie Antenna, your question really touches my heart! please! Must please!

(No kidding, I have to conceive a complete outline of the main world or the next dungeon. It is indeed necessary... Sorry. I don’t ask for leave very often. I hope everyone will understand.)

Ask for a day or two of leave, okay?

Finally please subscribe! Ask for full order!

By the way, begging for a monthly pass!

Love your bouncing antennas.