People are running for men, and Bai Mengyan is crying at the beginning

Yuan Jinlin was stunned for a moment when he heard that Xiang Long directly told him that he wanted to add a scene.

But with Xiang Long’s wonderful opinions yesterday, Xiang Long already had a certain weight in his mind, so he didn’t think much about it and followed Xiang Long’s train of thought and asked:

“What benefit does having you as the leader add to the overall movie?”

When this question was asked, Yuan Jinlin shook his head because he didn’t think Xiang Long could answer it. After all, this question was too high. Unless he was the director or screenwriter of the entire drama, it would be difficult to answer it from an overall perspective.

Just when he wanted to change the way he asked, he heard Xiang Long say:

“There are three benefits.”

“First, if I were a leader and su was not my girlfriend, then if I chose to kill her, it would not arouse doubts in the audience – with my ability as a leader, they would only think that I am calm enough Iron Blood – This will also make the whole movie more logical and there will be no obvious plot holes.”

“Second, if this leader shows enough strength and charisma, it will convey a belief to the audience – Chen Guorong is facing an extremely powerful and difficult opponent, and it is reasonable for him to lose to me. In this way When he defeats me later, the audience will feel more involved and more excited.”

“The third thing is my own selfishness. Of course, it is also good for the movie. That is, if I am charming enough as a villain and the audience reacts strongly, I may not be able to reboot the character and start a second film in the future.”

Hearing Xiang Long’s words, not only Yuan Jinlin was stunned, but Chen Musheng and even Cheng Long looked at Xiang Long in surprise.

They never expected that Xiang Long would actually answer this question from an overall perspective.

Regardless of whether Xiang Long’s opinion can achieve the effect he said, the fact that he can think like this shows that he has considered everything.

The three of them looked at each other, and Chen Musheng slowly asked:

“Xiang Long, do you think… the current script has big logical loopholes?”

Although Xiang Long didn’t elaborate just now, everyone present was a leader in the entertainment industry, so they could naturally understand the meaning of Xiang Long’s words.

brush!

Seeing Chen Musheng asking such a pointed question, everyone in the conference room focused their attention on Xiang Long.

This question is not easy to answer.

To admit it directly would offend Yuan Jinlin and other screenwriters involved;

But if he denies it, then the changes he mentioned earlier are completely unnecessary.

For a moment, the conference room was eerily quiet, and everyone breathed much lighter, waiting for Xiang Long’s answer.

Especially younger artists such as Xie Tingfeng and Cai Zhuoyan looked at Xiang Long with a kind of astonishment as “Is he crazy?”

Xiang Long also didn’t expect that Chen Musheng would ask this question directly in front of everyone, which suddenly gave him no room for maneuver.

but,

Now that he has spoken, Xiang Long will naturally not back down.

Taking a breath, he said seriously: “I don’t know much about the rest of the scripts, but judging from the part involving me, the logic of my character’s behavior is somewhat repetitive and cannot be resisted scrutiny.”

Although Xiang Long had tried his best to answer tactfully, as soon as his answer came out, the atmosphere in the conference room instantly solidified, and you could hear a pin drop.

Yuan Jinlin’s face was also a little stiff, and he spoke slowly:

“for example?”

“For example, as I said just now, I will kill su here.”

Xiang Long explained:

“In the play, the other four people and I are actually just friends and have no superior-subordinate relationship. If I don’t show convincing leadership, just because I tell my friends to shoot, it’s completely inappropriate. Considering the subsequent behavior, this small group may fall apart in an instant.”

Yuan Jinlin also realized that this behavior was somewhat inappropriate. He pondered for a moment and continued to ask without refuting:

“Any more?”

“There is also a plot where I personally delivered the bomb to the police station, and then ran into the prison to provoke Chen Guorong.”

Anyway, I’ve already said something, Xiang Long naturally won’t hide it:

“If it were other cases, there wouldn’t be much problem with this arrangement, but this is a bombing, and it happened in a police station! If placed anywhere in the world, it should be within the scope of a terrorist attack, even in Hong Kong. If all the police were not mobilized, they would at least subject me, the person who delivered the bomb, to strict interrogation, or secretly send two police officers to monitor… What’s more, Chen Guorong had already searched the information of several of us at that time. It can be said that Prime suspect.”

Hearing this,

Yuan Jinlin also frowned.

Jing Xiang Long said that this plot is indeed somewhat inappropriate.

Of course, you can force an explanation, after all.

Unexpectedly, Azu’s father is a police superintendent and his mother is a bank executive, who can use power for personal gain… But in that case, the tone of the whole drama will become a political drama instead of an action drama.

After realizing the problem, Yuan Jinlin immediately started thinking about how to correct it.

But several thoughts quickly appeared in his mind, but he rejected them one by one.

for a time,

The entire conference room fell silent.

Seeing that Yuan Jinlin was frowning and silent, Cheng Long coughed slightly, breaking the silence.

Yuan Jinlin was about to say not to disturb my thinking, but then he realized that he was still in the conference room and smiled apologetically:

“Sorry, I’m a little lost in thought.”

“It’s okay. Only if you think about it intently can it prove that our script reading is meaningful.”

Cheng Long said with a smile, and then said:

“But you can think about it on the sidelines. What Xiang Long said may not be right.”

He was deliberately stepping down for Yuan Jinlin.

unexpectedly,

Yuan Jinlin waved his hand:

“No, there is nothing wrong with the problem Xiang Long pointed out. His character’s behavior does seem a bit illogical when compared to the entire film.”

“Well……”

Cheng Long didn’t expect Yuan Jinlin to be so sincere, and for a moment he didn’t know how to speak.

Chen Musheng smiled when he saw this and said:

“Screenwriter Yuan, since you think Xiang Long is right, why not come down and discuss it carefully with Xiang Long?”

Hearing this,

Yuan Jinlin stood up directly, waved his hand and said:

“What are you waiting for next – let’s go, Xiang Long, let’s go to my office to discuss it in detail.”

He is impatient. If the problems raised by Xiang Long are not solved, he may not even be able to eat well.

Xiang Long would naturally not object to this.

Immediately, the two people spoke to everyone and left the conference room.

Wait until they leave,

The conference room suddenly became noisy like water boiling.

You must know that among the entire crew, Xiang Long is the youngest one.

But now he dares to directly ask Yuan Jinlin for a role. The most important thing is that it seems that he has received preliminary approval from Yuan Jinlin, which is amazing.

An old man from the entertainment industry shook his head and laughed:

“Hey, it’s amazing, it’s amazing~~ If Xiang Long’s opinion is really adopted, by the time our film starts filming, he will soar into the sky!”